#122 – Do I have to?

By ratanaong

Do I have to? I had asked that question over and over again. I was at the platform 100 meters above ground. Peering down made my heart pounded harder than normal. While others have sweaty palm, I’ve got sweaty feet while standing there. My thigh muscles tightened even while I was away from the edge.

For months I’ve been getting myself ready for this jump. A challenge only the courages who had attempted understood. The jump would be a start to demonstrate to my friends and parents how brave I was although I could be shivering within.

Do I have to? While at the edge, I’m frightened but knew that sooner or later I would have to take the plunge. There’s no U turn. I will not backed off now else the tag of “Looser” will be on me.

I took a deep breath. Let it out fully and finally with the last deep breath, I took the plunge and dive into the empty space. I felt the strong cold breeze brushing against my cheek. “Ah ah…………” I screamed. Slicing into the thin air, I extended my wings and glide ahead as I swoop up and flap my wings. Yahoooo….I am now a full fledge eagle and soared through the sky ready for my first catch.

11 Responses to “#122 – Do I have to?”

  1. ratanaong Says:

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  2. Granny Smith Says:

    I was completely surprised by the ending! I was thinking of a human and bungie jumping, not of a fledgling eagle for whom the answer to “Do I have to” would have to be “Yes!’

    Clever plotting.

  3. Tumblewords Says:

    Surprised me, too! Nicely done…

  4. ratanaong Says:

    Hi Granny Smith and Tumblewords,

    Glad you came by and enjoyed the read. Thanks!

    regds, ratanaong

  5. anthonynorth Says:

    Well done! I was sure it was a bungie jump right to the end, too :-)

  6. ratanaong Says:

    Hi Antonynorth,

    Thanks for dropping by. That’s the idea, to spring the surprise at the end.

    regds, ratanong

  7. keiths ramblings Says:

    Surprised me too! A lovely piece

  8. Kamsin Says:

    Very clever! And was just wondering if English is your first language or not? As it’s very well written but you need to be careful about verb tenses and make sure verbs are all either in the past or present tense, as you seem to have mixed the two in some sentences. Sorry to point that out but I’m an EFL teacher so I can’t help but notice things like that!

  9. ratanaong Says:

    Hi Keiths ramblings,

    Thanks for the compliment.

    Hi Kamsin,

    Thanks for the compliment & feedback. I will edit later. Have a great week ahead!

    regds, ratanaong.

  10. danni Says:

    wonderful built in surprise – i loved it! — i thought i was in the mind of a sky diver on his first jump, was happy and surprised to be in the mind of an eagle in the last few lines — great!!!

  11. writetoday Says:

    Well done, you got us all. It gave me goosebumps especially when I did realize it was an Eagle taking flight. I could just imagine it, wow! Nice. ( thank you also for your comment on my first blog entry).

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